Jenise nice first response! I definitly like how you start off your response with providing the reader with an example of you and your friends having a argument about something ang how you were the only person who understood what you was saying. It was an excellent way to connects to Banach lecture and to start your reasoning. When you mentioned the quote where Banach said "When you think of it, each of us is alone in the world. Only we feel our pains, our pleasures, our hopes, and our fears immediately, subjectively, from the inside," I toatally agreed on what you were trying to say. Since we are the only people that can feel our pain or emotions and have our own experiences even if they are similar to others, it is sometimes to hard and complicated to understand and tryto explain to others. So that was a great point that you brung up because that was one of the keys of the lecture.
I like the way you portray your ideas and reasoning in this response because you have a tone where you are trying to ask a question about what he is trying to say and at the same time giving the reader a better way of thinking on the way Banach is trying to "sell" his point. I can tell you understand what he is saying, it seems to me like you are taking his side on us being alone in this world and then again you are disagreeing with him. So in a way your in the middle of it. You agree and disagree.
Overall, this response on the first part of his lecture, was thorough, detailed, and well explained and I clearly thought you got your point across on each side, agreeing with him and disagreeing with him.
Well done Jenise! Ihope to read more on what you have to say on this topic!
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