post for maggie

Maggie Nice post!

I can clearly see that you have alot to say. When I was reading your post, I can definitly see that we have alot of stuff to say in common. Some of the things we have in common is the subject of how people let other people determine their live rather than themselves making that decision themselves. One quote that you said in your response made a think extra hard. When you you said "Banach thinks that the outside influences act like expectations that we have to live up to but we always have a choice to live up to these expectations or not.". It was so good I had to re-read it about 3 times. I understand what you mean you say that. Banach does think the people around us are influences against what we want. I like the fact that you brung that point up. It show's that you know exactly what he his trying to tell his readers.

You really know how to express your thoughts into writing. You are good at showing your emotions and how what you are saying is right in a way. I like how you bring up specific quote's that Banach says and analyze it. You know how to explain a quote really good and you have good opinions and thoughts about it.

For your future post I suggest that you try and create some of your own question's that you have about his writing if you haven't done so because it can help you. question's can give your reader a better understanding on what you are thinking and what argument you are trying to persuade.

Overall it was a nice post. Nice job!